Stylistic Edit

You’ve got a completed manuscript. You’ve done some basic edits and you’re happy with the overall shape of the project.

Now you need a fresh pair of eyes – preferably not belonging to a dear friend or relative (thanks, Mom, but not everything I write is “amazing!”).

The Stylistic (or Line) Edit focuses on projects that have

What a Stylistic Edit Does & Does Not Do

  • Focus on story level questions such as
    • General Flow
      • Scenes
      • Transitions
      • Clarity
    • Sentence Structure
      • Readability
      • Semantics
      • Prose
  • Not a Content Edit
  • Not a Proofread. It is likely that another pass will be needed to eliminate remaining:
    • Typos
    • Misspellings
    • Punctuation errors
    • Repetitive words/phrases
    • Continuity issues

The Process

  1. Send me your project and a summary. The summary should address the following questions:
    • A brief outline of the project (3 pages MAX).
    • What other feedback and/or edits (if any) have you received?
    • A book wiki if you have one and/or style guide if you or your publisher uses one
  2. We will coordinate about scheduling and pricing.
  3. I will fully read and edit your project. This will include suggestions to reword sentences, rearrange paragraphs, note areas of potential reader confusion, mark things for deletion such as repetitive words/phrases/passages.
  4. I will send you several documents, listed below.
  5. You will have a chance to address concerns, ask follow-up questions, and discuss revisions options, either via email or scheduled call/video chat.

What You Receive from Me

  • A thorough read and review of your current project
  • A style guide, which includes standardized spellings, especially for names and non-English words.
  • A fully edited version of your project. All changes will be clearly marked. It will be up to you to accept or rejected suggested revisions.

What I Need from You